MY favourite place in the WORLD!
April23
Learning Intention: To understand the purpose of descriptive language and vocabulary and how it can create visual picture in the readers mind.
The primary purpose of descriptive writing is to describe a person, place or thing in such a way that a picture is formed in the reader’s mind. Your task is to write a description of your favourite place in the world.
1. Include many vivid sensory details that paint a picture and appeals to all of the reader’s senses of sight, hearing, touch, smell and taste when appropriate.
2. Try to use figurative language such as analogies, similes and metaphors to help paint the picture in the reader’s mind.
Draft the paragraph in your writing book and publish in a word document to then post onto the blog.
Dear fellow bloggers,
I will be talking about my favourite place in the world, my favourite place in the world is a beautiful beach in Montenegro, the beach is called Yaz…
I come in the morning and feel the waters salty and cool breeze cross my face. I dip my toes in the fresh water to see if I should go and swim, I want to swim. I jump in the water and hear the splash, once in the water I hear the voices around clearly. I go underwater with my goggles; I see the clean seaweed and the tiny, harmless fish. As I come back out of the water I smell food, but I resist for I want to be in the water some more. When I go underwater I feel as though I am in another world, though logically I am. Once I am out of water I spread myself on my chair and watch the beautiful surroundings. My favourite place is the beach in Montenegro, called Yaz.
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Dear fellow bloggers,
I will be talking about my favourite place in the world.
My favourite place in the world has one pink wall and a window as big as an averaged sized wall. The curtains that cover the window are like an army of flowers. The timber covering the concrete floor glows in the sunlight from the window which lies open during the day. The cool breeze from the open window fills the room with a fresh scent of roses that entice the place in spring. The roses outside that cover the window gives a relaxing look to the place and the autumn wind at night blows the curtains back and forth creating a ghost look to the place at night. The place at night is dark but when at night there is always a small light that keeps the dim dark room lit. The wardrobe that lies east of the door has three rectangular mirrors that are securely stuck for eternity. I feel calm and relaxed in this place no matter how I feel. When I am angry and I set myself in my room I feel calm and happy because my room lets me be alone making me think about problems in my life
If you haven’t found out what is my favourite place in the world it is my bedroom.
From FX
Dear fellow bloggers,
My very favourite place in the world is where the mountains are. Where the cattle feed and the birds sing. It’s back in New Zealand on my good friend’s farm.
The farm is the first place I go to when I visit the country. It is in a tiny little town like a beautiful European plaza surrounded in high mountains and a beautiful waterfall of a river. The place is surrounded by desolation .When it’s hot I like to leap in the water and swim into the cave were the colourful birds sleep at the dead of night. I feel like I’m in another world. I like to rock climb up the mountain and look at the plaza from the tip of the waterfall. I hate to go down
From S.F.
My favourite place in the world is the beaches and seas that lie on great ocean road. There on the beaches I feel blissful and in peace. All you can hear are continuous call of the seagulls and the waves crashing onto the shore where I sit. My feet sit comfortably in the fine, cool yellow sand all across the empty beach. There aren’t many people when I am there and I think I like being there alone, so I have time to myself. I love running into the cool blue water that is so refreshing after the scorching sun shines on me all day long. It feels like I am in another world where I can just relax and not think about anything else. After a while I come bag to shore dragging myself away from the pull of the waves. The smell of the ocean mist is different and unique from all other smells. Coming here is a treat and I am lucky I get to go there and enjoy myself.
My favourite place in the world is Noosaville beach in Queensland. I love the feeling of the warm, soft sand slipping through your fingers as you sit on the beautiful beach with an icy cold, dripping soft drink in one hand and some cooked-to-perfection hot chips in the other. The soft drinks are sweet and fizzy in flavour and the chips are salty and crispy. Mmm. What’s not to like about Noosa beach. I also love the refreshing feel of the crystal clear water lapping up against your skin as you wade into the sea and especially the slippery, slimy colourful seaweed feeling under your feet. The scenery is magnificent too. The different sized yachts floating on the water are a lovely sight with their colourful stripy or dotty sails up. Another great sight on this beach is the beach huts. With the occasional splash of bright colours and the well-chosen other colours these huts make this beach what it is. The smell of salty air greets you when you arrive and the sound of seagulls calling is surprisingly calming. Noosa beach is definitely my favourite place in the universe!!!
Dear fellow bloggers,
I will now take you to my favourite place in the world.
As I entered the stadium, bursting with energy, the thought of me scoring and assisting my fellow team mates was a vivid sight inside my mind. As the team was warming up I turned and caught eye to eye with one of my opponents. The expression that he wore on his face told me that he was determined to take the win without saying a word. As I felt the rubbery grip of the basketball it made me feel confident when I swiftly shoot the ball. Finally it was time to start the game that I longing for. As the siren went off and the sound lingered on inside my mind I was determined to win.
Dear fellow bloggers,
I would love to share my favourite place in the WORLD!
My favourite place is . . . somewhere with people jumping with enjoyment, whizzing past you laughing and enjoying a lovely large drink of coca cola. A whip of a delight hotdogs leaving a trail of crumbs behind them. Feeling the roar of a coaster riding passed you; Screaming, shouting and soring though the air not knowing when to stop. Look up close to see the new born polar bear, Henry and his mother be feed by the good experienced owners of my favourite place in the world! Have you guessed yet? Well, let me tell you more. Enjoy the shows of many amazing water creators. Swim with the awesome most talented dolphins and feed them slimy, stinky fish. Enjoy shows with the amazing SpongeBob square pants and Dora the explorer! Okay have you guessed yet? Well the only place in the world with my favourite things would be . . . Sea world!!!!!
Dear my fellow bloggers,
I will now introduce you to the most amazing place in the WORLD!
My exciting place is crazy there is determined people surrounding everywhere; they push and shove trying to find there next super duper ridiculous turn, screams and laughter swooping through the air, sudden stops and drops. It is my place of mind my place of happiness a place that I can just let myself go release my fear from inside. I can see flash and feel the giant winds as they go soring past. Laughter of shock is released. As I see the hairy sugary bundle on a stick I crave it deeply my mouth is watering for that flavour. I can never help myself from facing my fear on the ridiculous drops and upside down turns I call myself mental. I feel my stomach being left behind on the top of the drop. I could spend a eternity at my favourite place in the world! LUNAR PARK!
Dear fellow bloggers,
My favourite place in the world,
The place is hot as the sun. I can feel the hot sand though my fingers; whilst watching the waves crashing on the orange sunset, at my favourite place in the world. The smell of my family and I eating fish and chips, at my favourite place in the world. The taste of fizzy coke and the yummy fish and chips, at my favourite place in the world. The sound of people talking and playing, at my favourite place in the world. So do you know what my favourite place in the world is, if not it is Sorrento.
Dear bloggers
My favourite place in the world is the Great Barrier Reef in Queensland. I love the way the soft warm sand running through my toes and the salty smell of the sea water. The cold, clear sea water the colourful fish swimming around you and everywhere. Lots of big and beautiful corals lay under the salty water it’s like a huge kingdom for fishes. When I rise up to the surface I can feel the cold breeze of the icy wind like wave lapping on my face. The Great Barrier Reef is definitely my favourite place in the world.
My favourite place in the world
Is a place where you can relax and swim; the water is so warm and the beds in the hotels are amazing. You can walk to the hot springs and when you are near the hot springs there is this place which takes you to see lots of mountains. The hotels are really cool; the hotel has 20 levels at level 12 there is a restaurant, the food at the restaurant is so tasty when you eat one thing from the restaurant you can’t stop eating. The place is Mornington at a five star hotel
My favourite place in the world,
Is a place where the waves are higher than the hotels. When you look at the window you can see the whole city. The water is hot like a hot chocolate. It has movie world, wet n wild, sea world, dream world. The hotel beds are softer than a giant pillow. The beach has the aqua water that would want you to stay forever. It has a cafe that is 5 stars. It has a spar that would make you feel better in a second I was on the 19th floor and there was 23 floors. My favorite place in the world is Queensland.
My favourite place in the world is the Gold Coast. In 2009 I went with my family dad, mum, Alexia and Athena. In the Gold Coast we had Pizza for dinner we went on a plane.
We unpacked our clothes and put them in the closet I played mini golf I went to Wet Wild and went on the water slide. For lunch we had Hot Chips and Pepsi and went back on water slides and I went home for dinner. My favourite thing in the Gold Coast was going Shopping I bought a Kevin 11 car.
We stayed in the holiday house it was nice we had 2 bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a meals area.
We stayed in the gold coast 6 days.
I was feeling tired and happy to go home.
It was fun.
1. When I saw the photo I thought that they are very poor.
2. When I saw the image it made me think about soccer, money, education and hospitals.
3. The image made me feel sad because they are poor and they want to be healthy.
4. I thought people are upset because the soccer has famous people and the famous people are rich
5. It will impact their lives because everybody might not want to play soccer
6. I think the main message use your money wisely